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Grunge Punk Episode #1

Monday, October 12th, 2009

Plastic. Logan hated ‘stic.  His mole had been tunneling through a flotsam rainbow of it for the past three days.  The non-biodegradable vein of a bygone age was prone to gumming up the grinders and blocking off the sorters from receiving any useful materials his mole gobbled up.  He had already lost half a day swapping out grindheads and changed course four times to try to break clear.

This is what it was going to be today, he mused as he fumbled for his patch case.  Taking out one of the quarter sized blue slappatches, he briefly debated and grabbed a second one, removing the silvery backing, and adhering them to the back of his neck.  As the saying goes, no one ever complains about the blue ones.  He could already feel the comfortable numb removing him from his sense of time as he settled in behind the controls.

Plastics.  It’s not all bad. After he dropped it off at Control he would still cover his costs.  Its not that ‘stic didn’t pay well.  Recovered plastic was reconstituted back into the petroleum that it came from and still brought a fair price by weight, but mining it was tedious.  You can’t run the mole all out and it generally cost plenty to extract in both time and parts.  He really wouldn’t mind plowing through a vein of organics to close out the week.  You could punch through that at full throttle and be done in half a day with full tanks of high-grade compost.  Maybe he could hit a vein of old IC boards or cell phones. A load of lithium or gold would make up for all the ‘stic he had been hauling and, as he figured, he was due.

Suddenly the mole lurched and shuddered to a halt. Logan shot up, pulling the transmission into neutral and locking the mole down by rote, before even bothering to check the damage panel to see what the ‘stic had gotten to this time.  The damage panel showed up clean so he flipped it into diagnostic just in case.  He brought up the analyzer log from the sorter. The mole had frozen on an error code from the spectrometer and had already uplinked the data back to Control.  He pulled at the virtual panels trying to get at the definition of the error code.   They were written for desk jockeys who apparently had a background in organic chemistry.

He slapped the panels shut and pulled up the last few seconds of the spectrometer’s log.  It was reading that he had broken into a pocket of organics.

Great, what’s the problem. He popped the hatch and was momentarily stung by the decomposition of rotting biomatter. Should have put on a wet suit, he thought as he grabbed a re-breather and gathered himself to go up to the grinders.  Walking up to the front along the tunnel under the old landfill, he could hear one of the sleds from Control pulling in behind the mole.  Wonder what I hit that they came all the way down here to ‘help’ me with.

He hauled himself up the outer ring of the grinder cone and leaned past the yellow and black warning bars.  He found himself face to face with a human skull. Only partially decomposed, the empty sockets of its eyes looked back at him almost as shocked as he was.  It’s face had been mostly lost to the grinders but even the sickening glance that Logan managed before he slid off the mole and began retching into his re-breather told him all he needed to know.

As the suits from Control strolled up, he was able to pull himself together just enough to speak.

“It’s a little girl”.

Story Elements

Friday, September 4th, 2009

A quality game is a lot like fishing.  You need to use a big enough net to catch the whole group.  You must maintain control without making them feel like they are powerless.  You need to give them enough room to run and tire them out, if you get them in the boat too soon, they’ll put up a fight.  You have to keep them out of the weeds or everything grinds to a halt.  You need to keep them from funning for the bottom or you’re never get them in the boat.  You have to use the right bait, a good strong line that will hold if they start to struggle and that can’t be cut right through, the wisdom to know when to let them run and when to reel them in, when to use the net, and when its time to hit them with a bat.

Hooks

A good story grabs you from the very beginning; it lays out the basics of the story, connects with you on an emotional level, and gives you a reason to follow along to the end.  This is called the Hook.  It takes hold of the audience and draws them into the story.  A bad hook makes the players feel like they are being dragged along or you lose them entirely and they go looking for something else to do.  A good hood grabs the players at a deep emotional level, anger, fear, or curiosity, and makes them want to get in the boat with you and seek the resolution on their own.  The bigger your group the more complex the hook, if you don’t grab them all party dissention may derail the game.

It is important to know your players and their characters well.  You need to hook them by the emotions so you need to know what makes them tick.  All art invokes and emotion.  And artful hook makes the players feel the way you want them to and makes them want to go where you lead.  A weak hook creates apathy or disinterest and makes the game move slowly, if at all.

Using the same hooks all the time lessens their impact.  The characters only have so many relatives you can capture or kill and the players will eventually move their families and friends into a tall tower somewhere.  Maintain a constant atmosphere of anger or fear, and the players adapt and you have to up the ante.  You can’t just threaten them every week, eventually you have to wound, maim, and ultimately kill.  Then what do you do?  Intro a new character each session, work hard to ge the characters to like them, and then summarily shoot them in the head?  The characters will withdraw and stop bonding with anyone including each other.  You have to change your lures often.  Capture their family, expose their past, offer them wealth, power, glory, or steal their toys.  Attack their pride by showing them up with a rival; make them doubt their own assumptions by changing the rules.  Send in the damsel in a dress, the arrogant villain, or the revel with a cause.  The players should never know what to expect when you rollout the hook, if they think they do then throw them a curve and prove them wrong.

Pushes – Plot Drivers

The scenes that move the plot forward are called Pushes, Bumps, or Beats.  They are the dramatic movements that give the story a kick by delivering information, introducing the key characters, or providing the time to put the pieces together.  Pushes keep the story from being a continuous stream of actions scenes with the plot of a video game – defeat opponents, acquire new weapons, advance to next stage.  Character development and role-play requires the freedom of dramatic scenes to give the players a chance to engage in dialogue instead of gunplay.

Pushes can be used to give the characters plot elements; clues, key characters, directions to explore, or even “red herrings” – misleading information to throw them off the straight track.  Pushes can also be used to develop the subplots, and alter the pacing.  If the game is moving too fast, cool things down with a “flavor” NPC that doesn’t develop the plot but offers an entertaining divergence, a difficult shop owner, a traveling salesman with stories to tell, and investigative reporter looking for an exclusive – whatever fits the scene.  If the action is moving too slowly, then it is time to up the ante.  Bring in their “boss” to tell them to pick up the pace, send in victims to beg for help, or break down the door and just start shooting.  Show them things are happening in the world while they are just resting on their laurels.  They don’t want to go looking for a fight, bring the fight to them.  Pushes are a chance for developing the story and giving the characters the tools they need and the will to keep things moving.

Climax

The point of all this build up is to reach the Climax, the scene where the last piece falls into place or the pivotal conflict with the villain, where the story breaks into the open.  The Climax is the most important scene of the game.  The twists are exposed and all your hard work is in the open.  The Climax can make or break a game, a badly played revel where the puzzle or the mystery doesn’t fit the clues or is just solved for the players or climactic battle the players can not win or effortlessly roll over the opposition ruins the game.  Logical progression and scaling are just as important as showmanship and fitting the challenge to the group in running the pivotal scene.

Resolution

Like chess, a role-playing game requires a good endgame.  The Resolution is where the loose ends are either tied up or exposed as possible hooks for the next game.  It is the victory scene for the players if the win or the cliffhanger for the next game if they lose.  The captured are released, the villain is dealt with or escapes, and the threat is ended or revealed as a larger plot.  All stories must have and ending and the resolution ties up the episode either as a happy ending or the foreboding of “to be continued…”.